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2026年1月26日星期一

經典 84 Charing Cross Road by Helene Hanff

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14 East 95th St.
New York City

October 5, 1949

Marks & Co.
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2
England

Gentlemen:

Your ad in the Saturday Review of Literature says that you specialize in out-of-print books. The phrase “antiquarian booksellers” scares me somewhat, as I equate “antique” with expensive. I am a poor writer with an antiquarian taste in books and all the things I want are impossible to get over here except in very expensive rare editions, or in Barnes & Noble’s grimy, marked-up schoolboy copies.

I enclose a list of my most pressing problems. If you have clean secondhand copies of any of the books on the list, for no more than $5.00 each, will you consider this a purchase order and send them to me?

Very truly yours,

Helene Hanff
(Miss) Helene Hanff

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

25th October, 1949

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Madam,

In reply to your letter of October 5th, we have managed to clear up two thirds of your problem. The three Hazlitt essays you want are contained in the Nonesuch Press edition of his Selected Essays and the Stevenson is found in Virginibus Puerisque. We are sending nice copies of both these by Book Post and we trust they will arrive safely in due course and that you will be pleased with them. Our invoice is enclosed with the books.

The Leigh Hunt essays are not going to be so easy but we will see if we can find an attractive volume with them all in. We haven’t the Latin Bible you describe but we have a Latin New Testament, also a Greek New Testament, ordinary modern editions in cloth binding. Would you like these?

Yours faithfully,

FPD
For MARKS & CO.

14 East 95th St.
New York City

November 3, 1949

Marks & Co.
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2
England

Gentlemen:

The books arrived safely, the Stevenson is so fine it embarrasses my orange-crate bookshelves, I’m almost afraid to handle such soft vellum and heavy cream-colored pages. Being used to the dead-white paper and stiff cardboardy covers of American books, I never knew a book could be such a joy to the touch.

A Britisher whose girl lives upstairs translated the £1/17/6 for me and says I owe you $5.30 for the two books. I hope he got it right. I enclose a $5 bill and a single, please use the 70c toward the price of the New Testaments, both of which I want.

Will you please translate your prices hereafter? I don’t add too well in plain American, I haven’t a prayer of ever mastering bilingual arithmetic.

Yours,

Helene Hanff

I hope “madam” doesn’t mean over there what it does here.

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

9th November, 1949

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

Your six dollars arrived safely, but we should feel very much easier if you would send your remittances by postal money order in future, as this would be quite a bit safer for you than entrusting dollar bills to the mails.

We are very happy you liked the Stevenson so much. We have sent off the New Testaments, with an invoice listing the amount due in both pounds and dollars, and we hope you will be pleased with them.

Yours faithfully,

FPD
For MARKS & CO

14 East 95th St.

November 18, 1949

WHAT KIND OF A BLACK PROTESTANT BIBLE IS THIS?

Kindly inform the Church of England they have loused up the most beautiful prose ever written, whoever told them to tinker with the Vulgate Latin? They’ll burn for it, you mark my words.

It’s nothing to me, I’m Jewish myself. But I have a Catholic sister-in-law, a Methodist sister-in-law, a whole raft of Presbyterian cousins (through my Great-Uncle Abraham who converted) and an aunt who’s a Christian Science healer, and I like to think none of them would countenance this Anglican Latin Bible if they knew it existed. (As it happens, they don’t know Latin existed.)

Well, the hell with it. I’ve been using my Latin teacher’s Vulgate, what I imagine I’ll do is just not give it back till you find me one of my own.

I enclose $4 to cover the $3.88 due you, buy yourself a cup of coffee with the 12c. There’s no post office near here and I am not running all the way down to Rockefeller Plaza to stand in line for a $3.88 money order. If I wait till I get down there for something else, I won’t have the $3.88 any more. I have implicit faith in the U.S. Airmail and His Majesty’s Postal Service.

Have you got a copy of Landor’s Imaginary Conversations? I think there are several volumes, the one I want is the one with the Greek conversations. If it contains a dialogue between Aesop and Rhodope, that’ll be the volume I want.

Helene Hanff

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

26th November, 1949

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

Your four dollars arrived safely and we have credited the 12 cents to your account.

We happen to have in stock Volume II of the Works & Life of Walter Savage Landor which contains the Greek dialogues including the one mentioned in your letter, as well as the Roman dialogues. It is an old edition published in 1876, not very handsome but well bound and a good clean copy, and we are sending it off to you today with invoice enclosed.

I am sorry we made the mistake with the Latin Bible and will try to find a Vulgate for you. Not forgetting Leigh Hunt.

Yours faithfully,

FPD
For MARKS & CO.

14 East 95th St.
New York City

December 8, 1949

Sir:

(It feels witless to keep writing “Gentlemen” when the same solitary soul is obviously taking care of everything for me.)

Savage Landor arrived safely and promptly fell open to a Roman dialogue where two cities had just been destroyed by war and everybody was being crucified and begging passing Roman soldiers to run them through and end the agony. It’ll be a relief to turn to Aesop and Rhodope where all you have to worry about is a famine. I do love secondhand books that open to the page some previous owner read oftenest. The day Hazlitt came he opened to “I hate to read new books,” and I hollered “Comrade!” to whoever owned it before me.

I enclose a dollar which Brian (British boy friend of Kay upstairs) says will cover the /8/ I owe you, you forgot to translate it.

Now then. Brian told me you are all rationed to 2 ounces of meat per family per week and one egg per person per month and I am simply appalled. He has a catalogue from a British firm here which flies food from Denmark to his mother, so I am sending a small Christmas present to Marks & Co. I hope there will be enough to go round, he says the Charing Cross Road bookshops are “all quite small.”

I’m sending it c/o you, FPD, whoever you are.

Noel.

Helene Hanff

14 East 95th St.

December 9, 1949

FPD! CRISIS!

I sent that package off. The chief item in it was a 6-pound ham, I figured you could take it to a butcher and get it sliced up so everybody would have some to take home.

But I just noticed on your last invoice it says: “B. Marks. M. Cohen.” Props.

ARE THEY KOSHER? I could rush a tongue over.

ADVISE PLEASE!

Helene Hanff

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

20th December, 1949

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

Just a note to let you know that your gift parcel arrived safely today and the contents have been shared out between the staff. Mr. Marks and Mr. Cohen insisted that we divide it up among ourselves and not include “the bosses.” I should just like to add that everything in the parcel was something that we either never see or can only be had through the black market. It was extremely kind and generous of you to think of us in this way and we are all extremely grateful.

We all wish to express our thanks and send our greetings and best wishes for 1950.

Yours faithfully,

Frank Doel
For MARKS & CO

14 East 95th St.

March 25, 1950

Frank Doel, what are you DOING over there, you are not doing ANYthing, you are just sitting AROUND.

Where is Leigh Hunt? Where is the Oxford Verse? Where is the Vulgate and dear goofy John Henry, I thought they’d be such nice uplifting reading for Lent and NOTHING do you send me.

you leave me sitting here writing long margin notes in library books that don’t belong to me, some day they’ll find out i did it and take my library card away.

I have made arrangements with the Easter bunny to bring you an Egg, he will get over there and find you have died of Inertia.

I require a book of love poems with spring coming on. No Keats or Shelley, send me poets who can make love without slobbering—Wyatt or Jonson or somebody, use your own judgment. Just a nice book preferably small enough to stick in a slacks pocket and take to Central Park.

Well, don’t just sit there! Go find it! i swear i dont know how that shop keeps going.

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

7th April, 1950

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street.
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

I have to thank you for the very welcome Easter parcel which arrived safely yesterday. We were all delighted to see the tins and the box of shell eggs, and the rest of the staff joins me in thanking you for your very kind and generous thought of us.

I am sorry we haven’t been able to send you any of the books you want. About the book of love poems, now and then we do get such a volume as you describe. We have none in stock at the moment but shall look out for one for you.

Again, many thanks for the parcel.

Faithfully Yours,

Frank Doel
For MARKS & CO.

14 East 95th St.

April 10, 1950

Dear Cecily—

And a very bad cess to Old Mr. Martin, tell him I’m so unstudious I never even went to college. I just happen to have peculiar taste in books, thanks to a Cambridge professor named Quiller-Couch, known as Q, whom I fell over in a library when I was 17. And I’m about as smart-looking as a Broadway panhandler. I live in moth-eaten sweaters and wool slacks, they don’t give us any heat here in the daytime. It’s a 5-story brownstone and all the other tenants go out to work at 9 A.M. and don’t come home till 6—and why should the landlord heat the building for one small script-reader/writer working at home on the ground floor?

Poor Frank, I give him such a hard time, I’m always bawling him out for something. I’m only teasing, but I know he’ll take me seriously. I keep trying to puncture that proper British reserve, if he gets ulcers I did it.

Please write and tell me about London, I live for the day when I step off the boat-train and feel its dirty sidewalks under my feet. I want to walk up Berkeley Square and down Wimpole Street and stand in St. Paul’s where John Donne preached and sit on the step Elizabeth sat on when she refused to enter the Tower, and like that. A newspaper man I know, who was stationed in London during the war, says tourists go to England with preconceived notions, so they always find exactly what they go looking for. I told him I’d go looking for the England of English literature, and he said:

“Then it’s there.”

Regards—

Helene Hanff

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

20 September 1950

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

It is such a long time since we wrote to you I hope you do not think we have forgotten all about your wants.

Anyway, we now have in stock the Oxford Book of English Verse, printed on India paper, original blue cloth binding, 1905, inscription in ink on the flyleaf but a good secondhand copy, price $2.00. We thought we had better quote before sending, in case you have already purchased a copy.

Some time ago you asked us for Newman’s Idea of a University. Would you be interested in a copy of the first edition? We have just purchased one, particulars as follows:

NEWMAN (JOHN HENRY, D.D.) Discourses on the Scope and Nature of University Education, Addressed to the Catholics of Dublin. First edition, 8 vo. calf, Dublin, 1852. A few pages a little age-stained and spotted but a good copy in a sound binding. Price—$6.00

In case you would like them, we will put both books on one side until you have time to reply.

With kind regards,
Yours faithfully,

Frank Doel
For MARKS & CO.

14 East 95th St.

September 25 1950

he has a first edition of Newman’s University for six bucks, do I want it, he asks innocently.

Dear Frank,

Yes, I want it. I won’t be fit to live with myself. I’ve never cared about first editions per se, but a first edition of THAT book—!

oh my.

i can just see it.

Send the Oxford Verse, too, please. Never wonder if I’ve found something somewhere else, I don’t look anywhere else any more. Why should I run all the way down to 17th St. to buy dirty, badly made books when I can buy clean, beautiful ones from you without leaving the typewriter? From where I sit, London’s a lot closer than 17th Street.

Enclosed please God please find $8. Did I tell you about Brian’s lawsuit? He buys physics tomes from a technical bookshop in London, he’s not sloppy and haphazard like me, he bought an expensive set and went down to Rockefeller Plaza and stood in line and got a money order and cabled it or whatever you do with it, he’s a businessman, he does things right.

the money order got lost in transit.

Up His Majesty’s Postal Service!

HH

am sending very small parcel to celebrate first edition, Overseas Associates finally sent me my own catalogue.

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

2nd February, 1951

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

We are glad you liked the “Q” anthology. We have no copy of the Oxford Book of English Prose in stock at the moment but will try to find one for you.

About the Sir Roger de Coverley Papers, we happen to have in stock a volume of eighteenth century essays which includes a good selection of them as well as essays by Chesterfield and Goldsmith. It is edited by Austin Dobson and is quite a nice edition and as it is only $1.15 we have sent it off to you by Book Post. If you want a more complete collection of Addison & Steele let me know and I will try to find one.

There are six of us in the shop, not including Mr. Marks and Mr. Cohen.

Faithfully yours,

Frank Doel
For MARKS & CO.

14 East 95th St.

February 25, 1951

Dear Cecily—

Yorkshire Pudding out of this world, we have nothing like it, I had to describe it to somebody as a high, curved, smooth, empty waffle.

Please don’t worry about what the food parcels cost, I don’t know whether Overseas Asso. is non-profit or duty-free or what, but they are monstrous cheap, that whole Christmas parcel cost less than my turkey. They do have a few rich parcels with things like standing rib-roasts and legs of lamb, but even those are so cheap compared with what they cost in the butcher shops that it kills me not to be able to send them. I have such a time with the catalogue, I spread it out on the rug and debate the relative merits of Parcel 105 (includes-one-dozen-eggs-and-a-tin-of-sweet-biscuits) and Parcel 217B (two-dozen-eggs-and-NO-sweet-biscuits), I hate the one-dozen egg parcels, what is two eggs for anybody to take home? But Brian says the powdered ones taste like glue. So it’s a problem.

A producer who likes my plays (but not enough to produce them) just phoned. He’s producing a TV series, do I want to write for television? “Two bills,” he said carelessly, which it turned out means $200. And me a $40-a-week script-reader! I go down to see him tomorrow, keep your fingers crossed.

Best—

helene

Marks & Co., Booksellers
84, Charing Cross Road
London, W.C.2

9th April, 1951

Miss Helene Hanff
14 East 95th Street
New York 28, New York
U.S.A.

Dear Miss Hanff,

I expect you are getting a bit worried that we have not written to thank you for your parcels and are probably thinking that we are an ungrateful lot. The truth is that I have been chasing round the country in and out of various stately homes of England trying to buy a few books to fill up our sadly depleted stock. My wife was starting to call me the lodger who just went home for bed and breakfast, but of course when I arrived home with a nice piece of MEAT, to say nothing of dried eggs and ham, then she thought I was a fine fellow and all was forgiven. It is a long time since we saw so much meat all in one piece.

We should like to express our appreciation in some way or other, so we are sending by Book Post today a little book which I hope you will like. I remember you asked me for a volume of Elizabethan love poems some time ago—well, this is the nearest l can get to it.

Yours faithfully,

Frank Doel
For MARKS & CO.

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2026年1月16日星期五

110~100指考英文翻譯

指考

110
1 很多人好奇今年年初在美國破紀錄的低溫是否與全球暖化有關。
2 不論答案為何，氣候專家預告這種不正常的天氣將會變成新的常態。

Many people wonder whether the record-breaking low temperatures in the United States earlier this year are related to global warming.
Whatever the answer may be, climate experts warn that such abnormal weather patterns will become the new normal.

109
1 早期的博物館只開放給中上階層，而且參觀者必須事先申請進入許可。 2 現今多數人可以親自或透過線上導覽，享受探索文化珍寶的樂趣。

Early museums were only accessible to the upper and middle classes, and visitors were required to apply for entry permission in advance.
Today, most people can enjoy exploring cultural treasures either in person or through online tours.

109補
1. 學習不再侷限於學校內的正規教育，非正式學習已開始扮演重要的角色。
2. 例如，志工服務讓學生學到如何與不同背景及不同年齡層的人互動。

Learning is no longer confined to formal education within schools; informal learning has begun to play a significant role.
For example, volunteer service enables students to learn how to interact with people from different backgrounds and age groups.

108
1. 創意布條最近在夜市成了有效的廣告工具，也刺激了買氣的成長。
2. 其中有些看似無意義，但卻相當引人注目，且常能帶給人們會心的一笑。

Creative banners have recently become effective advertising tools in night markets and have also stimulated sales growth.
While some of them may seem meaningless, they are quite eye-catching and often bring a knowing smile to people's faces.

107
1. 快速時尚以速度與低價為特色，讓人們可以用負擔得起的價格買到流行的服飾。
2. 然而，它所鼓勵的「快速消費」卻製造了大量的廢棄物，造成巨大的污染問題。

Fast fashion is characterized by speed and low prices, allowing people to purchase trendy clothing at affordable prices.
However, the "rapid consumption" it promotes generates massive amounts of waste, leading to significant pollution issues.

106
1. 世界大學運動會（The Universiade）是一項國際體育與文化盛事，每兩年一次由不同城市舉辦。
2. 在比賽中，來自全球大學的學生運動員建立友誼，並學習運動家精神的真諦。

The Universiade is an international sporting and cultural event, held biennially in different host cities.
During the competition, student athletes from universities around the world build friendships and learn the true meaning of sportsmanship.

105
1. 蚊子一旦叮咬過某些傳染病的患者，就可能將病毒傳給其他人。
2. 它們在人類中快速散播疾病，造成的死亡遠超乎我們所能想像。

Once mosquitoes have bitten individuals infected with certain diseases, they can transmit the viruses to other people.
They spread diseases rapidly among humans, causing far more deaths than we can imagine.

104
1. 台灣便利商店的密集度是全世界最高的，平均每兩千人就有一家。
2. 除了購買生活必需品，顧客也可以在這些商店繳費，甚至領取網路訂購之物品。

Taiwan has the highest density of convenience stores in the world, with an average of one store for every two thousand people.
In addition to purchasing daily necessities, customers can also pay bills and even pick up online orders at these stores.

103
1. 食用過多油炸食物可能會導致學童體重過重，甚至更嚴重的健康問題。
2. 因此，家長與老師應該共同合作，找出處理這個棘手議題的有效措施。

Consuming excessive amounts of fried foods may lead to overweight in schoolchildren and even more serious health issues.
Therefore, parents and teachers should collaborate to identify effective measures for addressing this challenging problem.

102
1. 對現今的許多學生而言，在課業與課外活動間取得平衡是一大挑戰。
2. 有效的時間管理是每位有責任感的學生必須學習的首要課題。

For many students today, achieving a balance between academics and extracurricular activities poses a significant challenge.
Effective time management is a crucial skill that every responsible student must learn.

101
1. 有些我們認為安全的包裝食品可能含有對人體有害的成分。
2. 為了我們自身的健康，在購買食物前我們應仔細閱讀包裝上的說明。

Some packaged foods we consider safe may contain ingredients that are harmful to the human body.
For our own health, we should carefully read the information on the packaging before purchasing food.

100
1. 日本的核電廠爆炸已經引起全球對核子能源安全的疑慮。
2. 科學家正尋求安全、乾淨又不昂貴的綠色能源，以滿足我們對電的需求。

The explosion at Japan's nuclear power plant has raised global concerns about the safety of nuclear energy.
Scientists are seeking safe, clean, and affordable green energy sources to meet our electricity demands.

Mini's 108A

1. 創意布條最近在夜市成了有效的廣告工具，也刺激了買氣的成長。
2. 其中有些看似無意義，但卻相當引人注目，且常能帶給人們會心的一笑。

說明︰ 1.依提示在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文。 2.文長至少120個單詞。提示：右表顯示美國 18 至 29 歲的青年對不同類別之新聞的關注度統計。請依據圖表內容寫一篇英文作文，文長至少 120 個單詞。文分二段，第一段描述圖表內容，並指出關注度較高及偏低的類別；第二段則描述在這六個新聞類別中，你自己較為關注及較不關注的新聞主題分別為何，並說明理由。

### 中譯英

| Creative banners have recently become an effective advertising tool in night markets, and they have also stimulated the growth of buying interest.
| Creative cloth strip recently became effective advertising tool and also stimulated buying growth. |

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| Some of them may seem meaningless, but they are quite eye-catching and often bring a knowing smile to people’s faces.

| Some of those look seem less meaningful, but considerably attractive and often bring people smile. |

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### 英文作文

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| The chart shows the percentage of news categories that young Americans aged 18 to 29 follow. Notably, environmental and natural disaster news receives the highest attention, while art and culture receives the lowest. In recent years, countries worldwide have been focusing more on environmental issues because global warming is worsening. As a result, more people are becoming aware of these problems in their own countries. As for art and culture, most people do not participate in this field, making it a less popular topic. Few people are interested in learning about it.
| The chart show teenagers aged 18 to 29 view to different type of news. Speciously, environment and natural disaster is the highest. Artist and culture is the lowest. In recent years, regardless of which country all focus on environmental problem. Because global warming is getting worse and worse. More and more people are gradually noticing this problem in their own country. To artist and culture, most people are not participang this field. Belonging to less popular areas. Few people want to realize it. |

| Among these six types of news, I pay the most attention to entertainment and celebrities. For people around my age, this is likely the most popular news category because teenagers often do not focus much on serious social issues. They prefer to follow topics they are interested in, just like me. I don’t pay much attention to serious topics either—I just want to relax. Whenever a topic seems too serious, I tend to lose interest.

| In these six types of news, I focus cus on entertainment and celebrities. Concerning this news, it should be the most popular news in teenagers aged 18. Because this age will not give much attention on social issue. They only want to focus on their interested things. Like ke me. Do not have much attention on serious things. hings, just want to rel relax. As long long as it concern with serious things, I do not focus us on it. |

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## 練習文診斷與學習建議

### 一、中譯英常見問題：

1. **用詞不精確**：如 “cloth strip” 應為 “banner” 或 “flag”；“buying growth” 應改為 “growth in sales” 或 “buying interest”。

2. **句型結構不完整**：缺少冠詞（a/an/the）或主詞動詞一致問題。

3. **語意表達不夠自然**：如 “bring people smile” 應為 “bring a smile to people”。

### 二、英文作文常見問題：

1. **文法錯誤**：主詞動詞不一致（chart show → shows）、名詞單複數錯誤（type → types）、拼寫錯誤（speciously → especially）。

2. **句子結構不完整**：出現斷句或片段句，如 “Belonging to less popular areas.” 應依附在前句。

3. **用詞與表達重複或冗餘**：如 “focus cus on” 為拼寫重複；“as long long as” 為打字錯誤。

4. **段落發展較為跳躍**：第二段理由說明可更具體、更有邏輯層次。

### 三、學習建議：

1. **加強基礎文法**：特別注意主詞動詞一致、名詞單複數、冠詞使用。

2. **練習完整句子寫作**：避免寫出片段句，確保每句都有主詞和動詞。

3. **多閱讀英文範文**：觀察句型結構與用詞，提升表達的自然度。

4. **寫作後自我檢查**：檢查拼寫、文法，並嘗試朗讀以確認句子通順。

5. **嘗試使用連接詞**：如 however, therefore, for example 等，使文章更連貫。

Alice's 108A

1. 創意布條最近在夜市成了有效的廣告工具，也刺激了買氣的成長。

2. 其中有些看似無意義，但卻相當引人注目，且常能帶給人們會心的一笑。

| 正確英文 | 練習文（需修改處標示） |

|----------|------------------------|

| **中譯英** | |

| 1. Creative banners have recently become effective advertising tools in night markets, and they have also boosted sales.
| 1. **Creat-flag** become to **efficiently advertise tool** in recent days, and they also **let the number of seal grow up**. |

| 2. Some of them may seem meaningless, but they are quite eye-catching and often bring a knowing smile to people.
| 2. Some of them **seem have no means** but they **quite eyes-catching**, and **can often bring smile το people**. |

| **英文作文**（第一段） | |

| According to the chart, environmental issues and natural disasters are the most followed news among American youth aged 18 to 29, while arts and culture receive the least attention. In addition, social issues and international affairs also garner considerable interest, whereas news about school and education attracts a relatively smaller audience.
| According to the chart, the issue of **envivament and climate destrotion** is the news that teenagers from the USA **look forward the most**, and the issue of **art and cultrue** is **the lowest looked by them**; Besides, **The American Teenagers agers also marching warchis The news** about social issues and **international affort**, and **the people of them** who watch the news about school and education **are fewer than the former**. |

| **英文作文**（第二段） | |

| I usually follow news about arts and culture because it is related to my personal life and interests. I major in art-related courses, so I am interested in cultural topics and enjoy browsing related information online. I seldom pay attention to international news because it often involves politics and arguments among politicians. I do not like seeing people fight with each other. Although I know there are some good politicians who care about the country and international affairs, I still tend to avoid such news.
| I usually **focus the news** about art and culture, **it is** related **with** my personal life... and my hobbies. I major in the courses about art; **therefore, 1 am** interested in art and culture and **like to focus on information about them on Internet**. I seldom **watch the news** about international issues because **it is always related with political and arguement between politicians**, I do not like to **look people fight with each other, resulz** I know there are several **nice politicians take care of this country and international issues**, but I still **will decrease the frequent to watch this kind of news**. |

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## 📌 練習文診斷與學習建議

### 一、中譯英常見問題

1. **用字不精準**：如 “Creat-flag” 應為 “Creative banners”；“seal” 應為 “sales”。

2. **詞性誤用**：如 “efficiently” 是副詞，此處應用形容詞 “effective”。

3. **句型結構錯誤**：如 “seem have no means” 應改為 “seem to have no meaning” 或 “seem meaningless”。

4. **拼字與符號錯誤**：如 “eyes-catching” 應為 “eye-catching”；“το” 應為 “to”。

### 二、英文作文常見問題

1. **拼字與文法錯誤**：如 “envivament” → “environment”；“destrotion” → “destruction”；“cultrue” → “culture”。

2. **中式英文結構**：如 “the lowest looked by them” 應改為 “receive the least attention”。

3. **句子連貫性不足**：應多使用連接詞（如 while, whereas, because, although）來銜接句子。

4. **用詞重複或不當**：如 “focus the news” 應為 “follow the news” 或 “pay attention to the news”。

5. **大小寫與標點錯誤**：如隨意使用大寫（“The American Teenagers agers”）、句點與逗號混用。

### 三、學習建議

1. **加強單字拼寫與詞性辨識**：可透過閱讀英文文章、使用單字卡或語言學習app（如 Quizlet）來累積正確詞彙。

2. **多練習基本句型與連接詞使用**：寫作時先想好主詞、動詞、受詞，再透過連接詞擴展句子。

3. **善用文法檢查工具**：如 Grammarly 或 ChatGPT 輔助檢查，並對照正確句子理解錯誤原因。

4. **多閱讀英文新聞或短文**：觀察母語者如何表達“關注”、“喜歡”、“避免”等概念，提升語感。

5. **寫完後先自行檢查**：檢查拼字、大小寫、動詞時態與主詞一致性，再提交或請人批改。

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Mini's 107

1. 快速時尚以速度與低價為特色，讓人們可以用負擔得起的價格買到流行的服飾。
2. 然而，它所鼓勵的「快速消費」卻製造了大量的廢棄物，造成巨大的污染問題。

提示：
如果你就讀的學校預計辦理一項社區活動，而目前師生初步討論出三個方案：

(一）提供社區老人服務（如送餐、清掃、陪伴等）；
(二）舉辦特色市集（如農產、文創、二手商品等）；
(三）舉辦藝文活動（如展出、表演、比賽等）。
這三個方案，你會選擇哪一個？
請以此為題，寫一篇英文作文，文長至少 120 個單詞。
文分兩段，第一段說明你的選擇及原因，第二段敘述你認為應該要有哪些活動內容，並說明設計理由。

1. Fast fashion is feature for speed and low-priced, leting people can use affordable price to buy fashion clothing.

2. However, the fast fashion that it couraged produced a lot of waste, causing gigantic pollution problem.

If my school anticipate to take take place a community event. In these three options, I will choose to pronde Community service for the elderly. Like sending meal, sweep, or accompaning. Because Taiwan has a very serious problem on population. Especially the high-aged population. So, I suppose we should do something to slow down this situation. Even if there are not many thing we can do, we also can do the best of my ability.

From my point of view. In order to slow dawn this situation, we can accompany with elderly in our free time. Because most elderly's fanaly often busy in work. Seldom do they have time. to take of their elderly. Regular organize team activity to prevent the elderly from staying at home all the time. Do this can fully accompany those elderly, less they gradually fell lonely.

## 中譯英批改

| 正確句子 (Correct Version) | 練習文 (Your Version) |

| :--- | :--- |

| 1. Fast fashion is characterized by speed and low prices, allowing people to purchase trendy clothing at an affordable cost.
| 1. Fast fashion is feature for speed and low-priced, leting people can use affordable price to buy fashion clothing. |

| 2. However, the "fast consumption" it encourages has generated a massive amount of waste, causing significant pollution problems.
| 2. However, the fast fashion that it couraged produced a lot of waste, causing gigantic pollution problem. |

## 英文作文批改

| 正確表達 (Correct Expression) | 練習文 (Your Version) |

| :--- | :--- |

| If my school plans to organize a community event, among the three options, I would choose to provide community service for the elderly, such as delivering meals, cleaning, or offering companionship. Taiwan faces a serious issue regarding its population structure, particularly the growing elderly population. Therefore, I believe we should take action to alleviate this situation. Even if there is not much we can do, we should still try our best.

| If my school anticipate to take take place a community event. In these three options, I will choose to pronde Community service for the elderly. Like sending meal, sweep, or accompaning. Because Taiwan has a very serious problem on population. Especially the high-aged population. So, I suppose we should do something to slow down this situation. Even if there are not many thing we can do, we also can do the best of my ability. |

| From my perspective, to address this issue, we can spend time accompanying the elderly during our free time. Since many elderly people have family members who are often busy with work, they rarely have time to take care of their older relatives. Regularly organizing group activities can prevent the elderly from staying at home all the time. Doing so can provide meaningful companionship, reducing feelings of loneliness among them.

| From my point of view. In order to slow dawn this situation, we can accompany with elderly in our free time. Because most elderly's fanaly often busy in work. Seldom do they have time. to take of their elderly. Regular organize team activity to prevent the elderly from staying at home all the time. Do this can fully accompany those elderly, less they gradually fell lonely. |

### 主要問題：

1. **文法錯誤**：動詞形態（is feature → is characterized）、分詞使用（leting → letting）、贅字（can use → can buy at）。

2. **用字不精準**：low-priced（形容詞）→ low prices（名詞）、gigantic pollution problem → significant pollution problems。

3. **句型結構**：句子碎片化（如開頭多個短句）、連接詞使用不當。

4. **拼字錯誤**：couraged → encouraged、pronde → provide、accompaning → accompanying、fanaly → family。

5. **邏輯表達**：部分因果關係不夠清晰（人口問題與服務老人的直接關聯）。

### 學習建議：

1. **加強文法基礎**：特別關注動詞形態、主被動語態（is characterized by）及分詞構句。

2. **練習完整句型**：避免寫出片段句子，學習用連接詞組合相關概念。

3. **擴充實用詞彙**：

- 替代「big」：significant, considerable, substantial

- 替代「problem」：issue, challenge, concern

- 學習正確搭配：address an issue, alleviate a situation, provide companionship

4. **寫作組織訓練**：

- 第一段：明確選擇 + 2-3個具體原因

- 第二段：具體活動內容 + 設計理由

5. **檢查清單**：完成作文後檢查：拼字、動詞時態、單複數、句子完整性。

### 進步要點：

- 已能表達基本想法與選擇理由

- 嘗試使用複雜句型（如Even if...）

- 主題意識明確，段落大致符合要求

**練習方向**：建議每天練習5-10個「中譯英」句子，重點放在動詞搭配和介係詞使用；每週寫一篇150字短文，完成後先自我檢查上述常見錯誤，再對照範文修改。

Alice's 107

提示：
如果你就讀的學校預計辦理一項社區活動，而目前師生初步討論出三個方案：

1 Fast fashion is featured by speed and i price, lensing people can buy fashion clothes with price of people can aford.

2 However, "Fast-consume." encouraged by it create numerous waste things, causing the large pollute problem.

If my school will make a choose the plan two Holdding a market community activity, hold a I will Feutural market... can attrare some tourists or local wane To buy, we civil to visit. When they find something interesting. good productions they like and can earn money! The guest who buy might produce our school market and family, if they interest ar buy the goods. we can eam το bis our our or productions her friends marker and more mone money!

I think should inclusive of handicrafe made by school students or goods which are consist with the school, For example, the clothes the bags with the school mask, and the handicraft made by students with our creation or and immagination These goods not only good looking but also usefull in our life, and they can also let more and more people know the school. With more visitors come The marker, it can promote and the mose The developement with the nearby era important Thing 15 we can earn much money!

| **正確參考譯文** | **練習原文** |

|----------------|-------------|

| 1. Fast fashion is characterized by speed and low prices, allowing people to buy trendy clothing at affordable prices.
| 1. Fast fashion is featured by speed and i price, lensing people can buy fashion clothes with price of people can aford. |

| 2. However, the "fast consumption" it encourages generates a large amount of waste, causing serious pollution problems.
| 2. However, "Fast-consume." encouraged by it create numerous waste things, causing the large pollute problem. |

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二、英文作文

| **修正與潤飾** | **練習原文** |

|----------------|-------------|

| **第一段**
If my school is planning a community event, I would choose the second option: holding a special market. This kind of market could attract both tourists and local residents to visit. When people find interesting and high-quality products they like, they will be willing to buy them, which would help our school and participating families earn some money. If customers are satisfied, they might even recommend the market to their friends, bringing in more visitors and increasing our income.
| If my school will make a choose the plan two Holdding a market community activity, hold a I will Feutural market... can attrare some tourists or local wane To buy, we civil to visit. When they find something interesting. good productions they like and can earn money! The guest who buy might produce our school market and family, if they interest ar buy the goods. we can eam το bis our our or productions her friends marker and more mone money! |

| **第二段**
I think the market should include handicrafts made by students or items related to our school. For example, we could sell clothes, bags, or masks with the school logo, as well as creative handmade items designed by students. These products are not only attractive and practical but also help promote our school’s image. With more visitors coming to the market, it would boost the local economy and bring benefits to nearby businesses. Most importantly, we could raise a considerable amount of money for school activities.
| I think should inclusive of handicrafe made by school students or goods which are consist with the school, For example, the clothes the bags with the school mask, and the handicraft made by students with our creation or and immagination These goods not only good looking but also usefull in our life, and they can also let more and more people know the school. With more visitors come The marker, it can promote and the mose The developement with the nearby era important Thing 15 we can earn much money! |

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## **三、整體診斷與學習建議**

### **診斷：**

1. **詞彙與拼寫問題**：如 “i price” → “low price”、“lensing” → “allowing”、“aford” → “afford”、“consume” 應為 “consumption”、“pollute problem” 應為 “pollution problem”。

2. **文法結構錯誤**：句子結構混亂、動詞形式錯誤（如 “will make a choose” → “is to choose”）、主謂不一致（“it create” → “it creates”）。

3. **英文作文組織鬆散**：標點使用不當、斷句不清晰、語意跳躍，影響整體連貫性。

4. **用詞與搭配不準確**：如 “produce our school market” 應為 “promote our school market”；“handicrafe” 應為 “handicrafts”。

5. **大小寫與標點不一致**：英文專有名詞或句首常未大寫，句點使用不規律。

### **學習建議：**

1. **加強基礎文法**：建議複習動詞時態、主謂一致、名詞與動詞搭配，並多做句型轉換練習。

2. **累積常用詞彙與搭配**：可透過閱讀短文或範文，學習常見表達如 “be characterized by”、“generate waste”、“promote the local economy” 等。

3. **練習作文大綱與組織**：寫作前先列出重點（選擇、原因、活動內容、理由），並分為清楚段落，每段圍繞一個核心觀點展開。

4. **善用工具輔助**：寫完後可先使用文法檢查工具（如 Grammarly）初步修正拼寫與基本錯誤，再對照範文比較用詞與句型差異。

5. **中譯英練習要注重「意譯」**：不要逐字翻譯，先理解整句意思，再用正確的英文結構表達。

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Mini's 108

1 Creative cloth strip recently became effective advertising tool and also stimulated buying growth.

2. Some of those look seem less meaningful, but considerably attractive and often bring people smile.

The chart show teenagers aged 18 to 29 view to different type of news. Speciously, environment and natural disaster is the highest. Artist and culture is the lowest. In recent years, regardless of which country all focus on environmental problem. Because global warming is getting worse and worse. More and more people are gradually noticing this problem in their own country. To artist and culture, most people are not participang this field. Belonging to less popular areas. Few people want to realize it.

In these six types of news, I focus cus on entertainment and celebrities. Concerning this news, it should be the most popular news in teenagers aged 18. Because this age will not give much attention on social issue. They only want to focus on their interested things. Like ke me. Do not have much attention on serious things. hings, just want to rel relax. As long long as it concern with serious things, I do not focus us on it.

以下是依照您的要求，以左右對照表格形式進行的批改，並附上整體診斷與學習建議：

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### **作文批改對照表**

| **正確／通順寫法 (左)** | **原練習文 (右)** |

| ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
| --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |

| The chart shows what types of news teenagers aged 18 to 29 care about.
| The chart show teenagers aged 18 to 29 view to different type of news. |

| Specifically, the category “Environment and Natural Disasters” has the highest percentage.
| Speciously, environment and natural disaster is the highest. |

| “Arts and Culture” is the lowest.
| Artist and culture is the lowest. |

| In recent years, countries around the world have been focusing more on environmental issues.
| In recent years, regardless of which country all focus on environmental problem. |

| This is because global warming is getting worse.
| Because global warming is getting worse and worse. |

| More and more people are becoming aware of this problem in their own countries.
| More and more people are gradually noticing this problem in their own country. |

| As for arts and culture, most people do not engage much in this field.
| To artist and culture, most people are not participang this field. |

| It belongs to a less popular category, so fewer people pay attention to it.
| Belonging to less popular areas. Few people want to realize it. |

| Among these six types of news, I focus mostly on entertainment and celebrities.
| In these six types of news, I focus cus on entertainment and celebrities. |

| This type of news is probably the most popular among teenagers aged 18.
| Concerning this news, it should be the most popular news in teenagers aged 18. |

| People at this age may not pay much attention to social issues.
| Because this age will not give much attention on social issue. |

| They prefer to focus on things they are interested in.
| They only want to focus on their interested things. |

| Like me, I don’t pay much attention to serious topics.
| Like me. Do not have much attention on serious things. |

| I just want to relax.
| hings, just want to rel relax. |

| As long as something is related to serious matters, I don’t focus on it.
| As long long as it concern with serious things, I do not focus us on it. |

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### **作文診斷與學習建議**

#### **主要問題：**

1. **單字拼寫與詞性錯誤**：例如 “show” 應為第三人稱單數 “shows”、“artist” 應為 “arts”、“participang” 應為 “participating”。

2. **句子結構不完整**：多處句子缺乏主詞或動詞，例如 “Belonging to less popular areas.” 應改為完整句。

3. **用詞不精準**：如 “view to” 應改為 “care about” 或 “are interested in”；“speciously” 似為 “specifically” 之誤。

4. **大小寫與標點不一致**：專有名詞如 “Arts and Culture” 應大寫，句子間應使用適當標點連結。

5. **表達邏輯可更清晰**：部分句子之間缺乏連結詞，導致文意跳躍。

#### **學習建議：**

1. **多閱讀範文**：參考高一程度英文作文，學習常用句型與段落組織方式。

2. **練習造句**：先寫簡單完整的句子（主詞 + 動詞 + 受詞），再逐步加入連接詞使文章流暢。

3. **善用工具輔助**：寫作時可使用字典或文法檢查工具，確認單字拼寫與用法。

4. **寫完後朗讀一遍**：幫助發現不通順、不完整或重複之處。

5. **針對常錯類型加強**：如第三人稱單數動詞、名詞單複數、句子結構等。

繼續保持練習，你的內容想法很清楚，只需在表達結構與用字上多加打磨，一定會持續進步！

Alice's 108

1. Creat-flag become to efficiently advertise tool in recent days, and they also let the number of seal grow up.

2. Some of them seem have no means but they quite eyes-catching, and can often bring smile το people.

According to the chart, the issue of envivament and climate destrotion is the news that teenagers from the USA look forward the most, and the issue of art and cultrue is the lowest looked by them; Besides, The American Teenagers agers also marching warchis The news about social issues and international affort, and the people of them who watch the news about school and education are fewer than the former.

I usually focus the news about art and culture, it is related with my personal life... and my hobbies. I major in the courses about art; therefore, 1 am interested in art and culture and like to focus on information about them on Internet. I seldom watch the news about international issues because it is always related with political and arguement between politicians, I do not like to look people fight with each other, resulz I know there are several nice politicians take care of this country and international issues, but I still will decrease the frequent to watch this kind of news.

### **第一段批改（描述圖表）**

| 正確文（左） | 練習文（右） |

|--------------|--------------|

| According to the chart, the issue of **environmental protection and climate change** is the news that **young Americans (aged 18-29)** follow **most closely**.
| According to the chart, the issue of **envivament and climate destrotion** is the news that **teenagers from the USA look forward the most**, |

| **In contrast, news about arts and culture attracts the least attention from this group.**
| **and the issue of art and cultrue is the lowest looked by them**; |

| **Additionally, a significant portion of American youth also closely follows news concerning social issues and international affairs.**
| **Besides, The American Teenagers agers also marching warchis The news about social issues and international affort**, |

| **Meanwhile, the percentage of those interested in school and education news is lower than the aforementioned categories.**
| **and the people of them who watch the news about school and education are fewer than the former.** |

### **第二段批改（個人觀點與理由）**

| 正確文（左） | 練習文（右） |

|--------------|--------------|

| **Personally, I usually pay more attention to news about arts and culture, as it is closely related to my personal life and hobbies.**
| I usually focus **the** news about art and culture, it is related **with** my personal life... and my hobbies. |

| **I am majoring in art-related courses; therefore, I am naturally interested in arts and culture and enjoy browsing related information online.**
| I major in the courses about art; therefore, **1** am interested in art and culture and like to focus on information about them **on Internet**. |

| **On the other hand, I seldom follow news about international issues because it often involves political disputes and arguments between politicians.**
| I seldom watch the news about international issues because it is always related **with** political and **arguement** between politicians, |

| **I dislike seeing people in conflict with each other.**
| I do not like to look people fight with each other, |

| **Although I acknowledge that there are many dedicated politicians working hard for the country and addressing international matters, I still choose to reduce the frequency with which I consume this type of news.**
| **resulz** I know there are several **nice politicians** take care of this country and international issues, but I still will **decrease the frequent** to watch this kind of news. |

## **綜合診斷與學習建議**

#### 📌 主要問題：

1. **拼字與打字錯誤**：如 `envivament`, `destrotion`, `cultrue`, `arguement`, `resulz`。

2. **用詞與搭配不當**：

* `look forward` 意思是「期待」，用在此處不準確，應為 `follow`, `pay attention to`。

* `marching warchis` 為明顯錯誤，可能想表達 `also pay close attention to`。

* `decrease the frequent` 是中文直譯，正確說法是 `reduce the frequency`。

* `nice politicians` 語意過於模糊且不正式，可改為 `dedicated/serious politicians`。

3. **文法與句子結構**：

* 缺乏連接詞導致「流水句」：`I usually focus... it is related...` 應改為 `I usually focus..., as it is related...`。

* 介系詞使用錯誤：`focus the news` 應為 `focus on the news`；`related with` 應為 `related to`；`on Internet` 應為 `on the Internet`。

* 句子不完整或邏輯連接生硬：最後一句 `resulz I know... but I still will...` 結構混亂。

#### ✅ 學習建議：

1. **養成檢查習慣**：寫完後務必回頭檢查拼字，特別是主題關鍵字（如 environment, culture, argument）。

2. **善用工具**：寫作時可開啟拼寫檢查功能，或使用字典確認單字。

3. **掌握固定搭配**：重點記憶常用動詞片語，如 `pay attention to`, `focus on`, `be related to`, `be interested in`。

4. **學習連接詞與從句**：練習使用 `because`, `as`, `since`, `although` 等詞來連接句子，使文章更流暢。避免只用逗號連接兩個完整句子。

5. **提升用詞精準度**：嘗試使用更具體、正式的詞彙來表達想法，例如將 `nice politicians` 具體化為 `politicians who are dedicated to public service`。

**整體而言，您已能理解圖表資訊並表達個人觀點，主要需在「用詞準確度」與「句子連貫性」上加強。建議多閱讀英文新聞或短文，觀察其用詞與句子是如何自然連接的。**

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