1. 創意布條最近在夜市成了有效的廣告工具,也刺激了買氣的 成長。
2. 其中有些看似無意義,但卻相當引人注目,且常能帶給人們 會心的一笑。
說明︰ 1.依提示在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文。 2.文長至少120個單詞。 提示:右表顯示美國 18 至 29 歲的青年對不同類別 之新聞的關注度統計。請依據圖表內容寫一 篇英文作文,文長至少 120 個單詞。文分二 段,第一段描述圖表內容,並指出關注度較 高及偏低的類別;第二段則描述在這六個新 聞類別中,你自己較為關注及較不關注的新 聞主題分別為何,並說明理由。
### 中譯英1
| Creative banners have recently become an effective advertising tool in night markets, and they have also stimulated the growth of buying interest.
| Creative cloth strip recently became effective advertising tool and also stimulated buying growth. |
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| Some of them may seem meaningless, but they are quite eye-catching and often bring a knowing smile to people’s faces.
| Some of those look seem less meaningful, but considerably attractive and often bring people smile. |
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### 英文作文
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| The chart shows the percentage of news categories that young Americans aged 18 to 29 follow. Notably, environmental and natural disaster news receives the highest attention, while art and culture receives the lowest. In recent years, countries worldwide have been focusing more on environmental issues because global warming is worsening. As a result, more people are becoming aware of these problems in their own countries. As for art and culture, most people do not participate in this field, making it a less popular topic. Few people are interested in learning about it.
| The chart show teenagers aged 18 to 29 view to different type of news. Speciously, environment and natural disaster is the highest. Artist and culture is the lowest. In recent years, regardless of which country all focus on environmental problem. Because global warming is getting worse and worse. More and more people are gradually noticing this problem in their own country. To artist and culture, most people are not participang this field. Belonging to less popular areas. Few people want to realize it. |
| Among these six types of news, I pay the most attention to entertainment and celebrities. For people around my age, this is likely the most popular news category because teenagers often do not focus much on serious social issues. They prefer to follow topics they are interested in, just like me. I don’t pay much attention to serious topics either—I just want to relax. Whenever a topic seems too serious, I tend to lose interest.
| In these six types of news, I focus cus on entertainment and celebrities. Concerning this news, it should be the most popular news in teenagers aged 18. Because this age will not give much attention on social issue. They only want to focus on their interested things. Like ke me. Do not have much attention on serious things. hings, just want to rel relax. As long long as it concern with serious things, I do not focus us on it. |
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## 練習文診斷與學習建議
### 一、中譯英常見問題:
1. **用詞不精確**:如 “cloth strip” 應為 “banner” 或 “flag”;“buying growth” 應改為 “growth in sales” 或 “buying interest”。
2. **句型結構不完整**:缺少冠詞(a/an/the)或主詞動詞一致問題。
3. **語意表達不夠自然**:如 “bring people smile” 應為 “bring a smile to people”。
### 二、英文作文常見問題:
1. **文法錯誤**:主詞動詞不一致(chart show → shows)、名詞單複數錯誤(type → types)、拼寫錯誤(speciously → especially)。
2. **句子結構不完整**:出現斷句或片段句,如 “Belonging to less popular areas.” 應依附在前句。
3. **用詞與表達重複或冗餘**:如 “focus cus on” 為拼寫重複;“as long long as” 為打字錯誤。
4. **段落發展較為跳躍**:第二段理由說明可更具體、更有邏輯層次。
### 三、學習建議:
1. **加強基礎文法**:特別注意主詞動詞一致、名詞單複數、冠詞使用。
2. **練習完整句子寫作**:避免寫出片段句,確保每句都有主詞和動詞。
3. **多閱讀英文範文**:觀察句型結構與用詞,提升表達的自然度。
4. **寫作後自我檢查**:檢查拼寫、文法,並嘗試朗讀以確認句子通順。
5. **嘗試使用連接詞**:如 however, therefore, for example 等,使文章更連貫。
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