Alice's 108A

1. 創意布條最近在夜市成了有效的廣告工具，也刺激了買氣的 成長。

2. 其中有些看似無意義，但卻相當引人注目，且常能帶給人們 會心的一笑。

說明︰ 1.依提示在「答案卷」上寫一篇英文作文。 2.文長至少120個單詞。 提示：右表顯示美國 18 至 29 歲的青年對不同類別 之新聞的關注度統計。請依據圖表內容寫一 篇英文作文，文長至少 120 個單詞。文分二 段，第一段描述圖表內容，並指出關注度較 高及偏低的類別；第二段則描述在這六個新 聞類別中，你自己較為關注及較不關注的新 聞主題分別為何，並說明理由。

| 正確英文 | 練習文（需修改處標示） |

|----------|------------------------|

| **中譯英** | |

| 1. Creative banners have recently become effective advertising tools in night markets, and they have also boosted sales.
| 1. **Creat-flag** become to **efficiently advertise tool** in recent days, and they also **let the number of seal grow up**. |

| 2. Some of them may seem meaningless, but they are quite eye-catching and often bring a knowing smile to people.
| 2. Some of them **seem have no means** but they **quite eyes-catching**, and **can often bring smile το people**. |

| **英文作文**（第一段） | |

| According to the chart, environmental issues and natural disasters are the most followed news among American youth aged 18 to 29, while arts and culture receive the least attention. In addition, social issues and international affairs also garner considerable interest, whereas news about school and education attracts a relatively smaller audience.
| According to the chart, the issue of **envivament and climate destrotion** is the news that teenagers from the USA **look forward the most**, and the issue of **art and cultrue** is **the lowest looked by them**; Besides, **The American Teenagers agers also marching warchis The news** about social issues and **international affort**, and **the people of them** who watch the news about school and education **are fewer than the former**. |

| **英文作文**（第二段） | |

| I usually follow news about arts and culture because it is related to my personal life and interests. I major in art-related courses, so I am interested in cultural topics and enjoy browsing related information online. I seldom pay attention to international news because it often involves politics and arguments among politicians. I do not like seeing people fight with each other. Although I know there are some good politicians who care about the country and international affairs, I still tend to avoid such news.
| I usually **focus the news** about art and culture, **it is** related **with** my personal life... and my hobbies. I major in the courses about art; **therefore, 1 am** interested in art and culture and **like to focus on information about them on Internet**. I seldom **watch the news** about international issues because **it is always related with political and arguement between politicians**, I do not like to **look people fight with each other, resulz** I know there are several **nice politicians take care of this country and international issues**, but I still **will decrease the frequent to watch this kind of news**. |

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## 📌 練習文診斷與學習建議

### 一、中譯英常見問題

1. **用字不精準**：如 “Creat-flag” 應為 “Creative banners”；“seal” 應為 “sales”。

2. **詞性誤用**：如 “efficiently” 是副詞，此處應用形容詞 “effective”。

3. **句型結構錯誤**：如 “seem have no means” 應改為 “seem to have no meaning” 或 “seem meaningless”。

4. **拼字與符號錯誤**：如 “eyes-catching” 應為 “eye-catching”；“το” 應為 “to”。

### 二、英文作文常見問題

1. **拼字與文法錯誤**：如 “envivament” → “environment”；“destrotion” → “destruction”；“cultrue” → “culture”。

2. **中式英文結構**：如 “the lowest looked by them” 應改為 “receive the least attention”。

3. **句子連貫性不足**：應多使用連接詞（如 while, whereas, because, although）來銜接句子。

4. **用詞重複或不當**：如 “focus the news” 應為 “follow the news” 或 “pay attention to the news”。

5. **大小寫與標點錯誤**：如隨意使用大寫（“The American Teenagers agers”）、句點與逗號混用。

### 三、學習建議

1. **加強單字拼寫與詞性辨識**：可透過閱讀英文文章、使用單字卡或語言學習app（如 Quizlet）來累積正確詞彙。

2. **多練習基本句型與連接詞使用**：寫作時先想好主詞、動詞、受詞，再透過連接詞擴展句子。

3. **善用文法檢查工具**：如 Grammarly 或 ChatGPT 輔助檢查，並對照正確句子理解錯誤原因。

4. **多閱讀英文新聞或短文**：觀察母語者如何表達“關注”、“喜歡”、“避免”等概念，提升語感。

5. **寫完後先自行檢查**：檢查拼字、大小寫、動詞時態與主詞一致性，再提交或請人批改。

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